Preliminary Task 1-Rough Edit

Peer Feedback:

        -Good/Works well :
    -Shots 
    -Sound 
    -Mise-en scene 
    -Creation of tension  
    -Good diegetic sounds 
    -Sync was good  
    -Match on action  
    -Effects  
    -Use of camera shots 
    -Chase scene  
    -Perspective  
    -Natural sound  
 
        -Bad/need to work on :

    -Refine things  
    -Needs an after effect  
    -Sound design  
    -Titles 
    -Need to add in music 
    -Fix the last scene to make it more like a drop than a slow pan
    -Duration of credits was too short 

What I'm going to do:

-Tweak the sound levels and everything that is associated with the sound of the film. 

-Add in an after effect and change the credits and the shot that they are in so that there is more time to see the credits.
- Try to redo the last scene so that it makes it look more like a drop than what it does now. 

- Do a bit more practice on after effects so that my effects are more refined.